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You walked into the bustling market, pulling your messenger hat low over you head. It had been a while since you had been in a place so full of people. Standing dumbfounded by the sheer number of people going about you, you were obviously out of place, several people bumped into you from behind giving you glares over their shoulder as they walked by you. One extremly unlucky man had the bad idea of trying to pick pocket you. Taking his hand out of your messenger bag, you twisted it around. Practically everyone in the market square stopped what they were doing and stared. With a satisfying crack you let go of the mans now broken arm and watched him quickly stumble away.
Crap, you had attracted too much attention. You stood there, everyone still watching you, you face was turning red with embaressment, not knowing what to do.
Suddenly  a man, around seventeen, just around your age, beckoned you over with a bright smile and you felt the crowds gaze burninga hole in your back "Here, have a tomato, on me," he said throwing the tomato your way. He had light brown hair, emerald green eyes and his voice had a hint of spanish accent. Slowly everyone left going about their day but you caught the gaze of several wary passerybys as you munched on your new snack.
"Quite a stir you caused over there, huh," the boy said rearranging the vegtables in his stand.
"Yeah," you  whispered popping the rest of the tomato in your mouth. "Oh , thanks,"
"No problem," he said shooting you another brilliant smile making you turn as red as the second tomato he had just handed to you. What were you doing getting so flustered? You knew from your hundreds of years of experience that it was always the nice ones that betrayed you quickest. "Did I say something wrong? Or is there somehting on my face?" the man asked noticing you glaring at him.
"Oh, no nothings wrong, sorry," you replied.
"Oh thank goodness, I thought I might have said something stupid and offended you, I always ten to get nervous around pretty girls" he said breathing a sigh of relied and laughing making your face turn even redder than humanly possible. Looking at him you decided that there was no way that there was anything cruel or dishonest about this guy. Maybe if you were extra inconspicuous and made sure to were your cap you could come ba-
You lost your train of thought as a man bumped into you from behind knocking of your messenger hat "Oh sorry abou-," he said stopping mid sentence noticing what you ha tried so hard to hide "Look here girly," he said  roughly grabbing your arm as you tried to run away. You quickly looked away, but he forced you too face him with his other hand grabbing your face. He looked at your forehead, where a scar in the shape of a star inside a circle was burned into your forehead. The mark of a werewolf.
Ok well maybe DeviantPirateQueen knows but no one else does! Dont worry it is exactly what you wished for but I feel like tricking everyone else a little. Plot twists and such.

Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
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Chapter 6
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Chapter 7
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Chapter 8
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:iconthhedeathkitty123:
thhedeathkitty123 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Werewolf! i'm awesome!  Weremote Werewolf Howl batVSwolf glomp Ice Werewolf Werewolf Entry 4Halloween Mini Contest 
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mirahnorton Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
WEREWOLF YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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DrawingWolfGirl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Shock Emote OMG!!!! Sweet! I'm a werewolf!!!Werewolf Howl 
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CupcakeLover14 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh my. :iconshockplz:
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:iconhetaliaxreader:
HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thanks?
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:iconcupcakelover14:
CupcakeLover14 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, I meant like it was surprising that I was a werewolf!! But loved the story, and your icon!
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HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thanks!
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DerpyHooves33 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Mom, dad, am I adopted?
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ilove dat quessie
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:iconderpyhooves33:
DerpyHooves33 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
...okay
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cute icon
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:iconderpyhooves33:
DerpyHooves33 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
*lick yo face yo* 
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*explodes* KYAAH SO FRIGGIN KAWAII!
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DerpyHooves33 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
*giggles yo*
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yo yo yo!
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callamoon14 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes a werewolf story!!!!!!!!
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vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I is a werewolf? Well I still love the story though! :squee:
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blueava234 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Is this guy Spain?
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah right
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Anarrii Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kick ASS, I am a werewold ._.
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
ooh, it's a mystery :iconsecretplz:
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:iconhetaliaxreader:
HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though i was planning on it being like that im pretty sure its obvious by now XD
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
XD
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BlushEvilLips Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! Keep writing please! :D
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:iconhetaliaxreader:
HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its up!
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HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes sir~~ Ill start on the second chapter now, itll be short but its gonna be up tonight, please look forward to it ^_^
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BlushEvilLips Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great! Can't wait to read it! (:
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DeviantPirateQueen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Cant wait for the rest :faint: :la: :happybounce:
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HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yush! It may or may not be up tommorow, Il probably have written it up on paper but Ill feel too lazy to type it out, (like with my other request ^_^" )
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DeviantPirateQueen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol s'okay im just happy you started it :D ^.^
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HetaliaXReader Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
next chapter is up! Make sure to tell me what you think about it k (even though its like EXTREMLY short haha)
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DeviantPirateQueen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its great! Lovi saves the day~ :squee: cant wait for the next ch :happybounce: :)
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